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[Complete] [76K] [Love story] Coming of Age love story set in 90s and 2000s

The story of a teenage girl in the 90s who had a crush on a boy from school that got famous. It follows their story in the next twenty years, across coasts, breakups, other people’s weddings, and every version of themselves they grow into.

**Feedback I’m looking for:** overall pacing, whether the shifting POVs land the way they’re meant to, and whether the ending feels earned rather than out of nowhere.

**Timeline:** flexible

**Critique swap:** yes, glad to trade reads if you’ve got something of your own. Doesn’t have to be the same genre. I just love reading

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