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KENTMORE - single-cam comedy pilot - 32 pages

Title: KENTMORE

Format: Pilot

Genre: single-cam half-hour comedy

Pages: 32

Logline: "*In a tiny Napa Valley town where every family is defined by what they inherited, a stage manager who can't escape her last name and a newcomer who doesn't know his own are both circling the same man: the community theater's director."*

Feedback Concerns: I mainly want to know if the ensemble is clear, there are two primaries, four secondaries, another \~4 recurring type roles, then the rest. Is that obvious? Can you tell who they are? And... is it funny?

[Link to PDF](https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uxEE1v7k5aiiL-eNJ4UvQ1zmu0U3D-hF/view?usp=sharing)

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