Utopian Dystopia. Omu and Kappa-Kat

Their designs are inspired by Bouba and Kiki. For a dream of a comic. Omu is an Axolotl-Dog, and Kappa is a sort of Mutt. Goat, bird, cat?, and "demon" for lack of a better word. The genre is unnatural spec-bio and hard sci-fi-dystopia , under a thin illusion of light fantasy. Which gets torn away brutally when they try to locate a fallen star that has landed outside their borders, seeing the creatures that wish for respite. Anyway, these guys are young punks who question the status quo. Thoughts and advice?