Another voice analysis question, not breathy vs breathy

Hello,

I took two videos of the normal voice I was trying to go for vs making my voice a little breathy as per the advise from Kyra of SeattleVoiceLab. What do you guys think? I tried not making it too breathy, but added some breathyness to it when I went breathy. Please let me know what you think. I think I'm pretty close to getting this down, I have my own opinion now based on playing these videos back, but I was looking for some honest feedback. Please don't mind the lighting on the first video, I had a bright light on and it over exposed my face. Also if you think I should go more breathy, I can certainly do that too. My goal is to make it sound as natural as possible.

Clip 1

[https://youtu.be/dzxLrcfkFww](https://youtu.be/dzxLrcfkFww)

Clip 2

[https://youtube.com/shorts/E28YRfGEE1U](https://youtube.com/shorts/E28YRfGEE1U)

Thank you so much!!!