Voice Update 5: Looking for Tweaks

https://clyp.it/iekncjfl

Feeling dysphoric af today and want to figure out if there's any tweaking that I can start doing to get this sounding more authentic, I've got my larynx control down, my resonance feels right at the top of my esophagus but it doesn't sound quite right yet and I can't put my finger on what a point of practice is to improve it at this point?

Thanks <3