Looking For Feedback

This is a short story inspired by a novel I want to write. It is a sort of romance with very vaguely implied fantasy/supernatural elements. There is also some NSFW work stuff, meaning sex mentions because it focuses a lot on religious trauma. The story itself is also kind of dialogue heavy, I think.

I just want to know if it the writing or dialogue feels natural or over detailed. If anyone would be willing to give me feedback I would greatly appreciate it.

[Short Story — Healed](https://eversarcasticsalem.tumblr.com/post/692773706751148032/healed)