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r/writing • … • u/lechrus

POV question

I wrote a story in which I refer to the non-narrator character using "you" and "your" pronouns rather than "she" and "her," An example is the sentence: "You are the epitome of a hot mess." versus "She is the epitome of a hot mess."

Is this wrong?

(Not sure if that's POV or not since it's not the narrator but the other character.)

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