I would love feedback on my first chapter

I would love some feedback on my first chapter draft of a fantasy novel set in a proxy Renaissance Italy.

I have provided the link here: [https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ti7LacaOFW1sTGZCtIh3B0ucH6LYSWKb7Y\_R5oMMM04/edit?usp=sharing](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ti7LacaOFW1sTGZCtIh3B0ucH6LYSWKb7Y_R5oMMM04/edit?usp=sharing)